Friday, April 15, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday- 4-15

 Black and white images flashed on the screen behind her. The gathering dark encased the light, casting shadows on the stark white linens draped gracefully across her. Her dark eyes seductively lured you in, taking the focus away from the scenes being played out.  Ever so slightly, she opened her legs, making you desire more light. Her hand slid slowly beneath the drape, leaning back, she closed her eyes. The curtain on the large window began to close. He stood there dumb-founded and hard, fumbling through his pockets quickly for more money. 
"No! not yet," he yelled out.
Inserting more money into the bill changer, he urged the curtain to open once again. As the curtain opened, he was shocked to see a male had replaced the mystery woman behind the window. 
Motto: Make sure to always carry Visa.  

  


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60-160 words
Words to be used: the gathering dark.
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5 comments:

  1. Very nicely done, a lovely twist at the end, longing and longing lost.

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  2. I can totally see it all happening as you described. A very nice take on the image.

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  3. Haha! Very important lesson to be learned. Very visual writing. Enjoyable reading. Thanks!

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  4. ROFLOL!!! A delightful twist!

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  5. Thanks for all the great comments, it was fun to participate again.

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